Thursday, 7 September 2017

We are learning about descriptive writing


 I could hear the wild cheers “Warriors, Warriors” from the nervous crowd and the laughing from the opposition. I could smell my favorite hot dog wafting across the field. I received the ball and ran like a leopard straight down the field at the opposition I side stepped like a elusive deer and dived like a dolphin and scored in the corner. I felt so excited that I scored a try, the feeling was like winning lotto.

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