In class the teacher write 4 sentences and we had to fix them up. We had to keep it the same but
make more words and more descriptive words. The first lot of words are the teachers and the second
is my one.
It is night time.
make more words and more descriptive words. The first lot of words are the teachers and the second
is my one.
It is night time.
A boy walks on a road.
He sees a figure.
He feels happy.
It is a dark night with a bright shining moon and he can hear crunching in the distance
A boy is walking down a dusty gravel road.
He sees a dark gloomy shadowy figure.
He feels happy because it was his dad.
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